Thursday, March 4, 2010

Teacher Draft Comments

Choose three different colors and highlight every section of your paper where you discuss ethos in the same color, pathos in another color, and logos in a third.
Then, give your paper to one other reader. Have that person look at your draft and answer:
a) do they agree that you are actually discussing ethos (write agree or disagree), then write why
b) rewrite the person's connetive points in your own words. If you do not know what they are saying or are not sure, note that as well.
c) have a discussion with your partner about this feedback

Show this copy to me for credit and take it home with you as you work on your final drafts.

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